Revision

     So I wanted to start filming early this week, but as I was looking over my plans and storyboards I felt like something was missing. I just didn't know where to go next or how to add to my story. I decided to just re-storyboard the entire opening. 

    In my previous storyboard that I started, it began with her coming home from the gym. However, after thinking about it more I felt that it would set the idea better if she starts by looking at the mean comments and then uses it as motivation to go to the gym. I also thought more about how to introduce her love interest since the wave from across the street was kinda vague. I think it would be cool if shes getting several comments from the same account, and that person turns out to be her love interest. 

    As you can see from the first couple of frames, I changed the phone to a laptop so that she can switch from looking at the comments to editing her fitness videos. This way the audience can tell right away that she is a fitness influencer. 

    Another addition I made is having her get a phone call from her friend. I felt that it needed some dialogue to sort of explain things to a deeper extent, but to make it easier so I don't have to add an actor, I thought talking on the phone would be a good way to do so.